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dance by starlight I by ~vaega:iconvaega:


©2003-2009 ~vaega
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"And in the dark of the year when the bear goes blind, the Heir of Chaos shall come to the City of Heaven with a single companion, and they shall search for their destiny. Seek them the wolf that will bear them to the home of the gods and the blade of light that shall keep them from harm, and all may not be lost. . . ."
--- Selection from the Pyraean Prophecy of the Heir

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:iconryzellon:
*Bah* to the wusses who can't tackle a well written piece of prose.
It's really good. The narration from several character's points of view work to give the reader a much broader idea of what's going on. I think Alira is only mentioned once in chapter I by name, and that confused me a little, though.
Mm. I love the detail that went into this, especially the details that show how Dem and Lira are from very different lives.
You need to post more!

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"... e che'l mio basso ingegno
non sappia, ardendo, trarne altro che morte."
:iconki-chan:
... kekekeke. *is in happy place*

XD Damn you, putting a cool gypsy-like boy in this story. *still in happy place* It's so cute. I like Lira's attitude, she's sort of an almost tomboy, but she's got that pragmatic air too. XD Kekekeke. Your writing's really easy to follow, and not too flowery or too plain. ^_^ Nyah. *glomp* Wish I could read more of your stuff. *goes on to next chapter* Oh yeah, and +fav for you, so nyah.

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